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Re: The 35 Floor pt. 1
I hope you like! Part One of The 35 Floor. It's the tiiniest bit confusing, but I think i explained it pretty well! I'd love to hear your ideas on ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: L.O.Z. Oracle of Life
I know! i'm such a nerd! :smt075 I've always loved the Zelda series, and i just decided to write this for an LA assignment, and i have this big intricate ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Teddy Bear's Story
:elephant: :smt026 :smt044 YAYS FOR GAYS AND CHEERS FOR QUEERS!!!!! :smt044 :smt026 :elephant: lol I re-read your piece, and i'm still enchanted by it. You're so bold to go into ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Bloody Kisses 1
I haven't really finished the first chapter yet, so this will work. So, a short explaination of what happened is that seventeen year old Amelia is put into Caroline Heaton's ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: Labyrinth snippit
I kinda Freaked myself out while making this. This isn't your everyday frou-frou kids fantasy, because its supposed to be creepy. Please tell me what you think!!! We tell fantastic ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: Looking Glass Prologue
Hellu!! I noticed that you are an Ameirican Mcgee's Alice fan. Me too! I LOVE your alice siggy, too. Tell me what u think about my siggy! Ok, first of ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: Awakening
Alrighty, i hate gramar checks, leaves a biter taste on my tongue, so i'm just going to skip that. My favorite thing to do is ideas, so i'm going to ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: Cursed-1
HEY! This is the story I have been trying to post for FOREVER and I think ive Finally got it! So heres chapter 1. And as a side note, i'll ...
Jun 29, 2008 -
Re: Astray (4, pt. 1)
OOOHH keep writing please!! when i have to stop reading ur story its like pauseing a good movie!!! ok i think that you should try describing feelings more often, but ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Astray (2)
Talmon needs to get a haircut!! lol i really like this alot, and ameilia is cool!! Just a suggestion: try not to say lost all the time! maybe instead of ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Elements chapter 1
Hey! thanks all, i was just bored out of my mind so i didnt really get far on this. To tell you the truth, im procrastonating on the story ive ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: Elements chapter 1
Its been a while sense i have writen anything so i typed a part of my story idea that i have had for a while. I woke in a familiar ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: The Tale of Darkness
hrmmm i'm not quite sure what to say about this. because this is clearly a spinoff from lord of the rings and i am not sure if you were trying ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Magic's Curse
Hey! this was really well writen, but i have a few suggestions. I would say that your story needs much more describing of the enviorment and of emotions. the first ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Astray (1)
Hey!! this is acctually really good!! its a wee bit long, so you should try spliting it up in chapters. i really like how you made her had a really ...
Jun 25, 2008
