Abocreature

Thank you, that really helps a lot ^^.

I hope you enjoy it! ----------------- Chapter 2 I was walking down the hallway. Slowly, step by step, walking, just walking. The walls covered with blood, the floor with sweat. ...

I really like this story! I said it before and I'll say it again, I don't read vampire romances but this is really good! I can't wait until some more ...

In case your wondering what this is a fan-fiction of, it's for the game Mitadake High, which is a very loose fan-fiction of the anime, Higurashi no Naku Koro ni. ...

Good job! Great story! I don't usually read vampire romances, but I like this one! I like how you made her feel sorrow for her past. And all the details ...

Sorry if this is a little sloppy, it's my first draft of it, the first story I actually completed, and I had to combine a few of my original chapters ...

Ooh, interesting. I really like this story so far, please continue to post it. VERY few grammatical errors, good job! Like I said in the first chapter: If you have ...

Still some grammatical errors in this, but it seemed like less of them. I like how you describe her feelings and how she's (in my opinion) denying that she likes ...

Oh, I forgot to mention that I also enjoy writing poetry! I mostly like writing Haiku's, but spoken word is fun, too.

I was just looking around for a place to post my ideas for stories and I found this place.

I just joined this website about an hour ago, and I like it already! Unlike most boys my age (that I know of), I LOVE to write about romance. I ...

I like this story, and I'm interested to see what happens. There were a few minor problems, though. 1. There were a few Grammar errors. Some sentences had missing commas. ...