Abocreature

Thanks. I'll go through and fix it up.

I rewrote this (again) and changed the title. I hope you all enjoy it! ^^ -------------------------------------- Lilly: Lilly sat on the bed, her arms wrapped around herself to warm up. ...

I first wrote a story when I was in 3rd Grade. It was a story in the first-person perspective about me becoming a vampire and going through space and time ...

Great job! It's strange, though. It just felt like something was missing in this chapter. I just can't put my finger on it. It was a great chapter, nonetheless. It ...

I like this poem a lot! The ending made me laugh. Too bad I don't know what that would feel like... Anyway, this was a great poem. I think it ...

I'm sorry if this sucks, it's just one of those time-to-go-to-bed-wait-oh-my-God-I-forgot-to-write-my-poem! things... I just want to see what people think about it. ------------------ I have found my

Awesome chapter! I really liked it! I like how she seems to becoming more human around Isaac, and how she has no idea that she actually likes him and/or is ...

Nice! I like the name change. ^^ Better than anything I could have come up with. ^^

I'm not sure if I'm going to finish this story. It's because out of the 145 people who read it, only 1 person actually said it was good. I'm really ...

Yay! The beginning of love! This story is awesome! Thank you for writing this! I'm gonna be reading more vampire romances from now on! There were only a few grammatical ...

What kind of girl loses her virginity on her 14th birthday? There are so many grammatical errors in this that it is hard to read. Everything moved too fast. It ...

I liked this story! There are only a few things I would like to point out: ((OOC: This is my first ever attempt at romantic fiction, so feel free to ...

Sorry for how long it took, it's been pretty busy the past couple days. I know, this is VERY unrealistic, but this is the first story I have ever completed ...

This is exiting! I can't wait to read more! There were just a couple errors and comments I would like to make, though: Prologue "Are you ready, love?" I asked ...

Awe, sad but true. Very good once again! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I love how you express emotions and make it very realistic, it's almost as ...