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This is a very well done poem, the concept is great and i can relate because i feel this sometimes when im trying to write a poem well done and ...

Well done, this is a poem which i think nearly everyone can relate to because one time or another we have all felt like this "why love and care but ...

This poem i believe has great potential but it also has a few faults which i think makes it quite difficult to follow. Before i go on with the faults ...

Well Done, I Think this is a very light but very imaginative poem as i believe the concept is loose but very easy to follow "But they wouldn't listen to ...

This is just the worst way to spend all her days Its dark on a summers Friday She works late cause she's with a sicko making love on he's pay ...

This Poem is remarkable, i hope this is not a personal outburst but in a poets view it has a rich quality the stanzas are beautifully structured which highlight the ...

Wow this poem opens up a new page of imagination, to the fragile i believe they will see this as disturbing but this is because there missing the extended metaphor ...

In my eyes i believe that this is a poem which has two distinctive responses, without sounding cheesy this poem can be compared to Marmite and what i mean by ...

Feedback Is Vital So Please Share Your Opinions Tears fall from all directions Look at the Complexion Of a Life so far from perfection You resemble My worst fears Every ...

It is very short however very sophisticated, it sends out a clear emotion to the reader and this is the pivotal part of the poem which i believe you should ...

It is very short however very sophisticated, it sends out a clear emotion to the reader and this is the pivotal part of the poem which i believe you should ...

It is very short however very sophisticated, it sends out a clear emotion to the reader and this is the pivotal part of the poem which i believe you should ...

My Dense Eyes Feel Like Thier Bleeding But Now I Gotta Start Believing Cause Now I'm Sittin Back Lights Low Listening To Joe Budden Who is Pure Inspiration With Immense ...