AaquianNotyou

So... No one else has posted?

Zunis... Why am I not surprised this happened?

How many people have actually posted? I'm too lazy to go back and look...

The man and woman were gone. Mark returned his attention to the building in front of him and brought his hand to his mouth, munching on air. He blinked dimly ...

((Can I post, or should I wait for a couple new people to put an intro up?))

Heh, Nice. This piece was pleasant to read, though it did seem like a lot of talk. Perhaps a little more description would be nice, but it's enjoyable as is. ...

Hmmm... I like this, I really do. The dialogue flows more naturally than some of the pieces I read, and it feels pretty close to the reality of a modern ...

In all honesty, Miss/Sir, I enjoyed the original post as much as your revision. Yes, I'll agree some parts were confusing, like where you mentioned 'She' in regard to the ...

Mark took another bite of the hard bread and stretched while he chewed, hiding the fact that he was having trouble swallowing, let alone breathing. ' It's easier than yesterday, ...

I could have sworn I put the note in somewhere. Ah well, next time I'll post it beneath the post. And I have to say, Buscador! thanks. I have no ...

The cool grass felt so good beneath his aching head. Something was shaking him. No, someone was shaking him; and yelling in his ear. But he couldn’t move, couldn’t acknowledge ...

Heh, doubtful any of ya'll will see this now, but I feel I should put it in anyways: This is just a scene, thought the length would point to that. ...

Name: Mark Esteed Age: 26 Description (please use pictures): ((This picture is drawn by my best friend and love Janae Johnson. I don't like my drawing of him that much, ...

It felt good running down his throat, this choking smoke that was the product of the burning cigarette held between his lips. He removed it with two fingers clamped lightly ...