AWritersFantasy

Yeah, this is basically what I meant. :) Anything other than "hey, that was good, keep writing," because I tend to like semi-lengthy descriptive type critiques more than a one ...

I started writing that Watcher story I posted about, and I finished the first scene. Notes: -Not really looking for grammar/spelling type stuff to be pointed out at this point. ...

I only read a little bit of it, but I loved the description. There were a few spelling/grammar type mistakes, but those are fixable. I did like what I read, ...

This was a very good start. I might be repeating some things all ready pointed out, so bear with me. There were a few grammar here and there, but it ...

Eck...I had to do it that way before (we'd write out the code and then...I think we'd open it in a program, but I forget what one it was. It ...

It is pretty awesome! The only thing I'm having trouble with is getting around Dreamweaver. o___o I'm really hoping that I get it figured out before the person hosting it ...

First, I hope this is allowed in this section (this is the first place I thought of to post it on th eboard), so please let me know if it's ...

Yeah, I know- I was just hoping to use that page as more of a secondary source when creating the society I'm hoping to create. I'm not 100% sure if ...

By group, I mean...take a group like the Elders on Charmed. The Elders are the leaders of the White Lighters, who are guardian angel types for witches and/or future White ...

I was thinking the Watchers were alive, but another race. Names: Santavana (Avana for short) I like that you already have a nickname picked out. Kaanan Kaan for short? Briar ...

(but, santavana makes me think of "asante sana squash banana", and I would think "thank you very much squash banana" everytime I saw it.) LOL! I should TOTALLY do something ...

Playing off of write me's idea: There could be two forms of the Watchers. The new Watchers could be assigned to the mortals, just to make sure they can handle ...

Well, the part where you talked about giving a tip for who's going to die is what made me think of it. Have you seen the episode where Piper sort ...

Hmm. Kind of sounds like the Angel of Death- at least, the way they portray him on Charmed. Interesting idea, although I'm not quite sure if that's what I imagine ...

:| I really don't want them to be the same thing. I guess you're right, saving their lives is too close to the Whitelighters. But, as I said, There are ...