AWritersFantasy

As I said, I am no longer active here and this thread is over a year old. I am not taking any requests to read anything from here. I also ...

This thread is over a year old and I'm not an active member anymore, so...>.> I just get topic reply notifications so that's how I know you asked me to ...

Haha, nope. It does start with an A, though.

Hmm...-randomly guesses- Alyssa? My turn! Hobbies: Writing, role playing (both computer related things!), watching movies Place: Eastern Connecticut General attitude: Usually pretty happy. o.O Not sup

Quote: “You do realize how vulnerable I am down there,” Lucretia said. Missed some words. Also, is this a question or what? It's kind of a fake-out sentence - half ...

I stayed up until a little after 2 AM last night, working on my Caelestis: Keeper's Throne story/novel, and I LOVE some of the dialogue I came up with. I ...

First thing I noticed, if ya wanna emphasise something, never ever, put it all in caps. It looks untidy and unprofessional. Actually, I never meant to emphasize the word "stone," ...

Hey, I was planning on critiquing this for you but it hurts my eyes too much. Why don't you change the font, then perhaps more people will review. If you ...

Caelestis: Keeper's Throne is a fantasy fiction story/novel I'm working on. It's actually a sequel to my Child of Ashes: Outcast story I was writing, but I decided to work ...

Caelestis: Keeper's Throne is a fantasy fiction story/novel I'm working on. It's actually a sequel to my Child of Ashes: Outcast story I was writing, but I decided to work ...

Guess I'll be the first to ask for a critique. ^_^ Caelestis: Keeper's Throne is a fantasy fiction story/novel I'm working on. It's actually a sequel to my Child of ...

This is a newer story that's meant to be a sequel to my Child of Ashes: Outcast story. I do have reasons for writing them out of order, I swear. ...

A lot of this is probably stuff that's already been said, but I'm saying it for just in case. Over all, this story is very interesting. I think one of ...

Er, yeah, that's another one. >.> Pretty much anything outside of Star Wars fan fiction and fantasy are going to be a little iffy for me to read, but I'll ...

Yeah, I'm really not a huge fan of modern day fiction. The closest things I've enjoyed to that genre have been Catcher in the Rye, To Kill a Mockingbird, and ...