ATreeah

wow that was a very emotional poem it really flows smoothly...and i really liked the first 8 lines Good job :!: :D

I am just ging to say this now im bad at grammer...but im working on it:D

its very good nicole i actually knew u were good but i didnt know u were this good

ok thanks

hey welcome...cant wait to read some of your poems :D

im fine with spelling erik and with all due respect you kinda drowned the story in detail

you sound like my teacher :D

ok im not an artist but i'll TRY to critique could use some more colour but other than that it's CRAZY GOOD :D

i need help figuring out how Heinrich Schliemann's discovery of troy is related to Evan's discovery of the minotaur

ya welcome and this is a great environment to write in so...WELCOME AGAIN :!: :!: :!: :D

its awsome and very abstract i like it a LOT :!: :D

welcome 2 YWS :D

hey im ATreeah nice to meet ya :D

Longer than the last one :? :D dont worry i'll read it :D

COOL