ATreeah

i only had time to get about a fourth of the way don (sorry my friend) but a tip i wanna offer is that it doesnt really have much transition ...

AWSOME im actually in awe right now! :o

one thing that didnt make sense was that the shapeshift but doesnt that just mean the take on another form and NOT their abilities im not sure but if its ...

i loved every single second of reading this it sounded like a professionaly published book. :D

Oh my gosh i loved it i couldnt look away i was liturally on the edge of my seat..but there were a few grammer errors :D

Hi im ATreeah but my real names mack u can call me either but i prefer ATreeah...but anyways i just wanted to say this is one of the coolist sites ...

I really enjoyed the additional factor you added with the 7 realms nice job!

Awsome job again cant wait for chapter 4

Awsome chapter i loved it! =)

Hi not much to say for me i guess.