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CRAZY GOOD GRACEY :D

THANK YOU OH SO VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I look forward to reading this!

It is coming up ive only written out about 4 chapters and this is the only one ive found time to type up so far.

As a kid is biking down the sidewalk he is late as usual. As he bikes past “Big Ted’s Noodle explosion take out” an old fat man yelled at him ...

dont worry it didnt and i'll edit it later cause im publishing the first chapter right now. :D

Hi and welcome...this is a very cool site and i hope you enjoy it...OH and i hope to see some of your writting up soon :D

Okay i finished readining it not grown up, im not married yet, and i dont have kids...but somthing i thought you could improve on would be the establishment because i ...

ok sorry it was my first try ill try and edit it...when i get time :oops:

Its a small prologue but i hope you enjoy it. Destiny Entwines Prologue Once upon a time when the world was thought to be a utopia there were a select ...

im not a greeter like to say...WELCOME TO YWS :D

Crazy good its AWSOME :D !!!!!!!!!!!!

we are both in 11 at the same school we have late birthdays :D

ok i haven't read it yet but i have 2 computer classes im ahead of my work in so I HAVE TIME!

to try to better incorporate the POV change you were worried about you could use a narrator at the beginning and end maybe the person who was killed or the ...