ATragicLoveStory

Thanks. It was supposed to have a moral. that's all. and how life can be ruined by one mistake.

hopefully there is more to this story. it's so sad. =[ but in a good way.

my favorite one ever. and u wrote this in career pathways class. XD

eh. not my favorite one. it's ok. seems like it needs something...else to it...

you captured the real mind of a teenager head over heels in love. she thinks.

pretty good. i enjoy your other pieces better. this one seems kind of empty. especially the first line. it seems to need something...that doesn't fit the rest of the poem, ...

aww. this is cute. this is what TRUE love should be like. nicely written. good word choice. interesting. =]

here* more is coming. that's only chapter one.

ignore how things aren't indented. it won't indent on her for some reason.

More to be desired Chapter 1 More to be desired Chapter 1 It may not be perfect, Joanna mumbled as she gazed upon the miniature-sized mansion that would become her ...

very well written. I like the description you used throughout the story. Keep up writing. Can't wait to read more. =]

ugh. still no paragraph indents. they are supposed to be there...

First Impression I have to admit that I didn’t like him, not in the least. When I first set eyes on him, looking over every piece of clothing he wore, ...

it decided to not take my paragraph indents...

I mentally pictured myself in my own little world. Away from my life’s careless errors. Away from the sleepless nights, away from the night where my whole life seemed to ...