ATragicLoveStory

Wow. Nice feature, Nate. Thanks a ton. ^_^

This was so adorable. It interested me. I hope my first kiss will be like that that. ^_^ The only "problem" that I have with it, is the quote "Why ...

Venomous Attraction The poison escapes your lips And encircles mine Threatening to enter The fumes envelop me Making me woozy Unraveling my inhibitions And revealing my insecurities The venom enters ...

Daniel, Alainna and Andy had pretty much said everything I was going to point out. I'm not that big into fantasy either, yet it sort of caught my attention. I ...

I prefer paperback books over any other because whenever I read hardcover books, the jacket falls off somehow and I end up taking it off, plus they're heavier. As for ...

Puzzle pieces of corresponding shapes lie spread out on the kitchen table. Some dusty from being hidden for so long, some soggy from being slobbered on by the family dog. ...

it's realy cute and sweet. at some points i can sing it, and other parlts it's a bit harder.

I like how the rhyming scene and it gives off great imagery. Keep it up. =]

nice story. i love it. =] keep writing like this.

...wow. cute with really good description. i lilked it

yeah, it's up.

Chapter 2 “That’s a mirror,” James replied slowly “Just…a mirror? An ordinary, every day mirror?” “Yes, well, no.” He stuttered. She glanced at him and realized he had turned pale. ...

hmm...I enjoyed it. Very good description. Too bad that I didn't even know there was such an animal out there named an Osprey. I guess you learn a new thing ...

Embers Scorching pain Burning lies Smoldering thoughts Set ablaze by emotions Raining teardrops Smothering the despondency Extinguishing the agony within Leaving only embers

hey, everyone. I'm Stephanie. *waves* and excited to be here. I play percussion and piano as my second hobby to writing. I've already posted some works of mine so I ...