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awww. So adorable. I like how it ends up being her best friend she falls in love with and not her secret crush since kindergarten. Very situationally ironic. I totally ...

Makes me wonder. What is he guilty for? Who is this girl? Why didn't he answer? What happened between the two of them? Does he regret it deeply? Please don't ...

=) a wonderful, sad emotional story. I like how it was a slowly unraveling story how in the beginning he didn't know who it was and whether or not he ...

Very good. A well writen piece. i didn't quite understand what the italicized stuff meant. But you did a very good job on explaining how Katrine felt and I loved ...

Well written! Very sad and romantic, but very very distant. =( It's sad that it happened to you. I have kinda the same thing going on ; you're not alone. ...

O my god! I loved it! ^_^ It was so sweet and romantic and just about every other romantic thought that I've ever thought in my life! Haha XD. I ...

OK, that was creepy but awesome. It sounded like something Stephen King would write only shorter and less detailed and more understandable. I like how you created intensity out of ...

OK. I'm a total vampire freak so I really like this. I think you should write another one, explaining how the exchange students arrive and such. I can't express how ...

Hey, very nice. I'm sorry I don't know the song that goes with it. But I did kinda get the flow of it. I think you coulf have done a ...

Woo hoo! Good job! OK, but I do want to point some things out to you. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues; which is the first time I've ...

Very well written. A few minor spelling and grammar errors but it was still very well written and thought out. Mr. Alverez seemed more like a side character rather than ...

Jon-- Let me start out with saying: you got SKILLS ON YOU. =) like someone else said: " The simplicity of it makes it beautiful." So I'm wondering what the ...

Oh my goodness! "You're not the only one who's nervous." Cliff hanger, I love it! I am uberly-wondering what will happen between them. You could expand more in detail about ...

For the most part it was pretty decent. I'm not in high school so I don't really know how to relate to it, but it will be interesting to see ...

Hey pretty good job. A few minor spelling errors, I want you to read through it and try to find them. Like instead of 'biter' cold when he is entering ...