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Ok i liked this poem. Although i dont like alot of the imigery. However i think it holds alot that isnt seen right away. With looking deeper into this poem ...

This was writen in a weird way so idk and there may be ( lets say there is a lot of mistakes. more in punctuation than anything lol) but ya ...

Yes i diffinatly liked this poem. It seemed to put me in a mode of understanding which is hard to do. I felt like i was apart of the poem ...

It seems at times I can no longer shine forth; For darkness surrounds my steadfast will. I wish to embrace each challenge with confidence. Let me understand why I must ...

thanks. ya the capitalisation things were not on purpose lol each line was meant to be capital lol. and the others were miss prints lol. ya it had started out ...

hello one of my friends suggested this site to me. and so far i am enjoying it. its great to be able to post writings and to be advised on ...

originaly this was to come out diffrent but quite soon i found out it was more a feeling that is exsperianced. i leave this untitaled for the reason that it ...

wow wow wow(= when i was reading it i fallowed the rhythm of the main theme song of August Rush and it kinda worked " Three days ago, moonlight had ...

well i liked it. however it flowed with a more fact like point of view. like a statement of being and thought. i look at it with a more inner ...

thank u for the advice (= and i will edit it soon lol its something i deffinatly need help with organising my thoughts lol but im sure with time i ...

hey im new to this (= this is just some thoughts that came through (= A sorrowful pain drives up from beneath, With whispering despair it claws my thoughts, The ...