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In England, I often arrive late for school. When I wake up, a sense of panic always fills me. The morning will be filled with adrenaline and frantic footsteps on ...

I love this. :) I particularly love the third stanza. I'm not a fan of poems, but this is one I will remember. Great work!

I've broken quite a few rules. Maybe next time, I'll heed your word, only if there are reasons to. :D

I love these kinds of stories, full of historical facts and such. I've tried my hand at it once, but I gave up halfway because I couldn't get much research ...

You described anger really well. All of the mistakes are already pointed out. Over all, it's really cool. I love how you made it sweet and simple and yet described ...

Very nice! Especially about the baby! I would really like to listen to it as a song. Good job.

Thank you! :) I would make it longer, but I didn't know how.

Thank you for taking the time to review this! Ellie's age is about 16, bordering 17, but she is very immature. And what do you mean by British Slang? Could ...

Nice! Very well thought and creative. I love the last lines. I'll be looking forward for more of your work!

This is a nice beginning to a story, especially the first paragraph. There are a few things muddling me, but that makes me want to read more. I'm not much ...

This is a creative piece of work. I love your descriptive style, because it reminded me so much of my own writing style. Although I've tweaked and changed it a ...

Today is the 177th day. At the first signs of morning, we are awake. We eat breakfast together, feeling the warmth of the sun on our backs after a cold ...

Suddenly, all the familiarity disappears. I look around to find the person. He is nowhere to be seen. I slip my hand into my shirt to feel my heartbeat. It ...

Hello. :) I am also new here. My name is Sydney. I have been writing ever since I was 10. I had quit writing for a few years before going ...