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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mary-Sue: A life

    Whoa! You tore it down.. This is like a blast.. really! This is one of the best pieces i've ever read! You have an awesomatic future.. You have completely mocked ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Evidence Of Me

    Hey! Very nice.. N touchy if u know what is exactly the person would be experiencin! It is real wonderful n i think that u should try to elaborate it ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mr.Silence Must Die

    Hey! Nice work! You seem to have somethin very deep in mind n u had a little trouble explainin! Though nice thinkin! As the previous critic said.. Grammer is quiet ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Power Within-Chapter 1

    Hey! This is a nice little prologue we ca say.. Since things r quite fast runnin but thats not exactly bad! There has been a little injustice to the mother's ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Vampire

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiii! Shit! What happens next.. You could've added that! It is damn cool! I dunno what happens later.. But here.. I like the way you've brought in the part where ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Dear Berlin

    Hey! It is wonderful and beautiful.. What i'm gonna tell u is that you have an extraordinary charm of narration. You've made emotions of history possibly lovable here! U've made ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Death's Embrace

    There is nothing not to like.. It is absolutely true of how life slips away while there is hardly anything to safe.. You wrote in five minutes? Really? You've gotta ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Scripts Re: The Proper Decision

    I believe you must be a very convincing person when it comes to reality! I think it is pretty impressive though you must understand that when you write with zero ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Do you believe in life?

    [flash=]Do you believe in life? Or do you believe in one after? Do you believe it's right? To call failure a disaster? Do you have enough faith? Or do you ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Progression

    It is in a flow that enchants the reality check as well as it renews how anyone feels at a loss! I think you have done an absolutely awesome job! ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Thought

    How beautiful! I kinda rapped while i read it! I think you write wonderfully and just stick yo your style cuz..thats the way you express yourself and your the best ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Windchime

    It is a very nice story.. It is one of the greatest things a girl can face.. I don't know if you meant to oppose it or your just portraying ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My life according to school

    I think that its absolutely fantastic the way it is.. Well i saw it was called a blob but..whoa how many of us get to read blobs so cute and ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Help Wanted

    Wow.. You knew what you were writing! But above all it's nice how you brought about how sometimes life can still be happening though it means not more than a ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Can you use someone new?

    Hey! How nice to see so many beautiful writings n works.. Why do people complain that the writers are in a slow progress. They sure haven't seen this yet! Pull ...

    Feb 15, 2011


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