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Hmmmm... It seems like most of them liked it. Did I? Well... Okay... I did. But, honestly. I wouldn't want to lie. I found this a little like every other ...

Unable to understand. I'm in a fix. I don't understand what this meant. Did she die? Is she alive? Was she swallowed by the waves and killed? Drowned... I didn't ...

Hi there... I'm sorry to tell you this. But, I have already read a story like this one already. It was a published copy. But, I liked your version too. ...

It was short but it gave me thrills. I really like the fact that it started and ended quite soon and was able to narrate a vague though not the ...

Hi there... I'm Nida. And before I review, a piece of advice. Your a writer and what makes you good is firmness. I did see a lot of firmness in ...

Okay... That was a big deal of funny! I LOVED IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! Infact I was trying out new tunes that seemed apt for it. Way to go ...

Wow! That was beautiful! And your thoughts were very well balanced! That was excellent. And the your notice and fullness must be appreciated.

It is nice piece. If you are a philosophical person I'm sure you'd love it. But,I think that you can make it more poem like since when I read it ...

Hiiii! I don't regret reading this but I've found it so full.. I see your point. And i wont talk about your views cuz i respect the emotions set in ...

Hey! It was nice reading it though i see the problem is that it was way to long with no motion in the happenings.. You've added a lot of sense ...

I hope it gives you the creeps! Do complete the story though! Two years back. I knew a couple that others thought would create a history! Sam and tina.. There ...

There seems to be a little of you in it! A little too subjective in brief.. But the flow is great! I did have a feeling that is quite common ...

Heyy! It is for the first thing.. Very Very creative! You have done a good job there.. But if you provided with a little better reasoning would make it much ...

Hey! This was a really nice creative piece! When its fiction its enough that it is appealin.. It is not exactly important to make complete sense and i mean it ...

Very nice.. Beautiful.. N heart fillin! There is a spark in ur narration! It is touchy though.. I dunno how but i found a kinda hype.. I support writers way ...