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this is really great! this hero sounds quite mystirious . you don't give much away about him but thats good.

this is really good. fan fiction sometimes doesnt make sense but this does.

this is really brilliant ! Believe it or not things like that really do happen. I love to see the length this will go.

thanks for all the comments, this will really help my writing

thanks, i know its fast but it will all become clear. they have a past just wait and see. thabks for spotting the grammar sometimes i wright to fast to ...

your work is really clever, you get your point accross, i only hope that times get better for you. I know times are hard, from september i start my last ...

its a good story line, you should write more

wow, your novel so far accurately shows a soldiers opinion of a coward. as far as i cam see your grammar is brilliant. id really like to see where this ...

chapter one What do you do when all you ever loved, all you ever know tumbles down around you ? Thats the point, I just didnt know. I was young ...

I really like it, alot of relationships are hard or broken and I think you captured it beautifully

use this link, it's a playlist of music I used as inspiration for this chapter All I could hear were his terrified screams, they filled my head with an uncomfortable ...