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what about chapter work and novels?

"It'll be okay." Were the first words that Kate told her daughter when her husband had left them. So alone, no house, no love. Hermione was only five and diddn't ...

I found one mistake, but other than that it's a realy good piece. I often think what if it was someone else? And you've put it into words. wel done!

I think as girls we all expirience this. All the films about vampires and love, werewolves and love. We compare the love we have against this and find it rather ...

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This is really powerful and emotional, there is one mistake on line three I think but other than that I would say it's perfect. The simplicity of it and the ...

first I'll start by saying that your creative writing is really good and emotional. Your description is very powerfull and the vocabulary you used is ambitious and to a good ...

this is really good and emotional, i like your point of reality that some people just don't give a damn. Freinds and family were lost that day and it should ...

It's cute, I think this because we all ( as girls or boys) think of our perfect love in our heads, heck some of us even dream of them and ...

despite the few grammar mistakes (which we all make, don't worry) this is amazing, I nearly cried. can I give you a good hint, well read this story over and ...

Wow! So much emotion, I loved it. Your language and speechi s perfect, not using to much is really good. Il ove how we have no idea of the out ...

Her skin was beautiful and clear, her smile always held so much light. Getting lost in her eyes was almost enevitable because of the amazing sparks of colour within. I ...

The start of another dreadfull year, at the most boring of English colleges. I was starting to wish that despite the creditations I would get out of all this I ...

wow, this is really good ! Its written very quitly should I say, the emotion in it doesn't hit the reader in the face. All the good parts of Harry ...