4evadreamin

The ashtray was the first thing Kate saw that morning. She stared at it for a while, her body paralysed by tiredness. She had sat up and yawned loudly before ...

“Gillian,” the Star-gazer muttered, “let us see what’s in store for you then, my dear.” It was Gillian’s first ever encounter with a Star-gazer, and the one before her was ...

Thanks for reading :P , it was supposed to be a humourous twist at the end! Where abouts in Australia are you from? I have family in Perth. :)

“Gillian,” the star-gazer muttered, “let us see what’s in store for you then my dear.” It was Gillian’s first ever encounter with a star-gazer, the one before her was unusually ...

:shock: This poem is absolutely brilliant. I was drawn in by such a clever title, the boy who cried love. It could easily get published. I can't even find anything ...

Great review, thanks! I'll try and give them some more backround information. Thanks again. :P

I've just finished editing this, hope you think it's a bit better. It's not that much different, apart from punctuation this time!

Thanks! I'm so glad you thought that, don't worry about me I'm feeling loads better. I actually had to go to shool today because my mam and step dad wanted ...

Oh, thanks. Yeah, I know what you mean now. I'm glad you thought that... No, I've never done anything like that, I was fascinated by the sword fight on the ...

Thanks for the review! :D Great suggestions. Thanks.

Ooooh, yes! That's what it was... TIME. We invented time, or the clock. Where would we be without time? :wink: GMT stands for somewhere in England, yup, you're all hours ...

What's fencing? Maybe it's because I'm blonde. Maybe it's because I'm English, but I don't know that it means... The next installment is driving me crazy, I don't want to ...

Again, I need to do some editing. It is midnight though. It's so annoying, I fell asleep as soon as I got home from school because I was ill, I ...

Yes of course we have different accents! Haven't you heard the Scottish? Well Scotland is just above England and they speak really different. The poem, Our Jon. That's in Geordie ...

Thanks for all the feedback on this... Yeah, it's sort of creepy, because it's a "circle story" (never heard of that before, good way to describe it.) I had to ...