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  • Lyrics Re: Fatal Destruction (Lyrics)

    //Well, I wrote these lyrics for a local band (called Arbitrator), of which my friend is the drummer, but they rejected it for some reason. So I've uploaded it here... ...

    Dec 25, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: I also make music

    Those were cool...How did you create those? If you like check my music too:

    Oct 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Reconciliation

    Imagine ten years have passed You encounter the memories of the past X: You seem familiar Do you live somewhere near? Y: Is it Joe from high school? Hey, it ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Time dances in our shadow

    Very Good! Sounds really nice with all the musical would be awesome if you made it a little longer.

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Math...mwahahahah

    "A million different ways to say the same thing!"--this characteristic of Math has always bothered me; I don't know what's the point of doing that...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    I tried posting a poem through my mobile phone. It cost me 75 points, but didn't put up anything on the site.

    May 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Peddler

    Okay, you described the murder scene in a nice way, but what about the story? Where is the plot? The 'Peddler' came and murdered her and that's it? Why did ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    I really hate reviewing. How do I critique other people's work when I'm not better than them in any way? My hands shiver when I type a review to one's ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Ghost Story

    Thanks for your advice and critique, people. I've tried to fix some grammar and punctuation errors as advised. Regarding the Telling vs. Showing problem, I still need to learn a ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My Dear Person

    I didn't really understand what's meant by this poem. I'm sorry. I'm just stupid I believe. Is it about denying the existence of God?

    May 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Ode To A Woman

    That was some good poetry. It had all the qualities of a world class poem--nice rhythm, no difficult words, the capacity to drive people to thoughts. Though I don't believe ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: A Ghost Story

    Subratoo and I were engaged in that debate again. "That's not possible, dude." said I. "But I saw her. She was here yesterday night." "She has been dead for a ...

    May 5, 2011


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud