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Re: Fatal Destruction (Lyrics)
//Well, I wrote these lyrics for a local band (called Arbitrator), of which my friend is the drummer, but they rejected it for some reason. So I've uploaded it here... ...
Dec 25, 2011 -
Re: I also make music
Those were cool...How did you create those? If you like check my music too:
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Reconciliation
Imagine ten years have passed You encounter the memories of the past X: You seem familiar Do you live somewhere near? Y: Is it Joe from high school? Hey, it ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Time dances in our shadow
Very Good! Sounds really nice with all the musical would be awesome if you made it a little longer.
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Math...mwahahahah
"A million different ways to say the same thing!"--this characteristic of Math has always bothered me; I don't know what's the point of doing that...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I tried posting a poem through my mobile phone. It cost me 75 points, but didn't put up anything on the site.
May 8, 2011 -
Re: The Peddler
Okay, you described the murder scene in a nice way, but what about the story? Where is the plot? The 'Peddler' came and murdered her and that's it? Why did ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
I really hate reviewing. How do I critique other people's work when I'm not better than them in any way? My hands shiver when I type a review to one's ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: A Ghost Story
Thanks for your advice and critique, people. I've tried to fix some grammar and punctuation errors as advised. Regarding the Telling vs. Showing problem, I still need to learn a ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
I didn't really understand what's meant by this poem. I'm sorry. I'm just stupid I believe. Is it about denying the existence of God?
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Ode To A Woman
That was some good poetry. It had all the qualities of a world class poem--nice rhythm, no difficult words, the capacity to drive people to thoughts. Though I don't believe ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: A Ghost Story
Subratoo and I were engaged in that debate again. "That's not possible, dude." said I. "But I saw her. She was here yesterday night." "She has been dead for a ...
May 5, 2011
