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Hey Amie, Here I am for the second chapter. I have to say, the Prolouge was much better than Chapter One. Maybe because of how unique the bridge thing was, ...

Hey Amie, I'm here as requested, thank you for asking me to review this! I really love it. This is such a unique story, and it really makes me want ...

Can the convenience of failure be shaken from even you? Look around at your world, the one your daddy made and tell me one thing Who would you be if ...

Hey Kafka, Here I am, as requested! I, too, needed a dictionary next to me to read this. Your writing style overall is absolutely incredible. I still had many questions ...

She had a gentle mouth, a smile unduplicated, and her brown eyes turned green when she cried My memory of her is clear and each day a few drops of ...

I remember her. Sweet and beautiful, she was. I open my eyes.

Peter at the gates called amongst the sequoiahs older than himself

After a night Not easily forgotten My head's in the clouds

The letter melting in a fire slowly dying Never seen again

No problem. Both reviews are done.

Hey PaulClover, Thank you for asking me to review this. This is some of the best science fiction that I've read on this website so far, it really is. I ...

Hey Katrain, As requested, here I am. Wow. I'm being totally honest here, I havn't come across a poem this good in a long time. This was really unique, and ...

It's both, but it depends how you use it.

I love this! My favorite part of this poem was "Craving Fame as Well as Infamy". That's so true. I love your tone when you write this. It's so self-justifying ...

Hey Persephoneia, Thanks for giving me something to read! Your nervous sweat presses the smell into the air, rusty after all this time. I can almost see it hanging overhead ...