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Hey Rose! I liked the gneral idea of this poem. but I don't like the way you present it. What I mean is, I don't like your voice. You sound ...

And Kafka, yours is done.

Hey Kafka, I'm here as requested. Thanks for asking me to review this, I like it a lot. Honestly, it's hard to believe that a writer as talented as yourself ...

Well, I'm back! And Kiicoh's and Smile's reviews are done. Now, on to Kafka's.....

Hey Smile, I'm here as requested. Thanks for asking me to review this. I like the fact that you have the power over your readers in hte sense that short, ...

Wow. I'm here as requested, and thank you for asking me to review this phonomenal piece. It is truly origional, gory, romantic, and unexplainably vivid. Throughout the story you maintained ...

She rode horses in the day, Watched the stars at night, Shielded by an oblivious veil But now she sits today Wondering why she's not okay And why she never ...

Kiicoh, I'll be sure to review "Taylor's treasures" and SmileLikeUMeanIit, I'll get to your review as well, but maybe not for a few days. I'm really busy until maybe Thursday. ...

Hey Kiicoh, I'm here as requested. First of all, let me say that this was astounding. Your word choice was excellent, and the idea of a 'progression' was really there, ...

Hey Shiney, I really liked this. It was a very clever poem, and some little words and phrases that you use really made it great. "Necktie" and "pores and craters ...

Hey Medeivalwriter! Welcome to YWS. I've been a member for about a month now, and the more you are involved in this great community, the more you love it. Everyone ...

Only seven. I'm a little disappointed, but I was up to my neck in homework this weekend.

Seven down. Five more to 100...

Hey PoeticGlow, I agree with Jagged and Sarebear that the rhyming was a little awkward. I think that when you write a poem that you want to rhyme in, you ...

Hey idraxx, Could you take a look at this short story? Thanks in advance, Alex