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Oh, thank you. Yeah, poetry is really hard for me, so I usually stick to short stories, unless I have something really good on my mind. I also find rapping ...

I like the idea, but I don' know if you wanted this poem to have more of a beat to it. If you did, you might want to make the ...

I hid behind the curtains of the stage. Excellent opening hook! This was very unique and very descriptive for a piece of such short length. All I can say is, ...

I love it! Everything that I've read from this anthology had been great so far, and I have to say that this piece even tops "Dear God". It's very real, ...

Just posted to say that I've been a member of this community for just a day and I'm already hooked! Here's a bit about myself: I'm a very proud New ...

This is a story that came to me just a couple days ago. I really don't know where I'm going with this, but I think it's a good opening chapter ...

Overall, this was great. The MC's feelings were really developed, and the length of the poem is perfect. However, I really don't like how it starts. I wasn't hooked until, ...

I liked it. However, I am a bit confused myself as to who specifically you are indignant towards. Also, perhaps you can contrast this feeling with something else, if you ...

This definately isn't bad, but certainly not worth 100 points. Tell me, who's the one you love? Tell me now before I go to war Just let me know for ...

Hi, Rachel. It really is great to educate yourself with so many languages. Are you learning French and Spanish on your own, or through school? The only other language I ...

Hi, spy0h. I would give you my opinion of this, but I'm not sure what you want to do with this. Is this the beginnings of a short story, or ...

You and I have the same writing style! I love the opening two paragraphs, and the ending hook of that section is excellent. Society collapsed, and yet: there were survivors. ...

Since I have to log off soon, I was not able to read the entire piece, sorry. However, what I read was EXCELLENT. I can't even begin to tell you ...

Hi jujubean. I'm not that experienced of a writer, but I'm sorry to say that I think that this piece needs some work. I like the feeling of the poem ...

As someone had said before, I think you should expand on this idea, because this was beautifully written. However, there was one part of the story that caught my eye. ...