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Wow. As with all of your work, it is phonomenal. I have to say that one of my weaknesses as a critic when reviewing poetry is that it is hard ...

I think everything that was to be said about this poem was said by shiney1. Excellent work! I haven't reviewed any other work you may have posted here because I ...

Hi everyone! If you have something that you would like me to read and review for you, I would love to. I'll review anything you ask me to. So, ask ...

I'm not nearly this cocky in real life. I don't know why, but something compelled me to write like this. It's just a side project off my novel, I don't ...

There's a letter opener with my name on it I tossed it in the trash last night Trash is what we normally filter out when we speak You don't know ...

Excellent! I really have nothing else to say. This was so unique, that I don't find anything wrong with it. Welcome to YWS and keep up the great work! -Alex

I like it. Not too much I can say, because I don't think that you were deep enough with this poem, which I would be. The last line of your ...

Hey MoonlightAssassin, Could you take a look at this? It's a little lengthly, but it would be greatly appreciated if you butchered it. -Alex

Especially the more I end up writing in a short story, I like to space it out, so the feel of the story is kind of choppy, which leaves my ...

Hi Lumi, I was hoping you could check out the first chapter of a general fiction novel I'm putting together. It's kind of lengthly, but I hope you tear it ...

Hi, I PMed you about this one. It would be great if you could give it a read. A general overview would be nice. Thanks, Alex

Oh, that's okay. Haha, at this point, you're supposed to be confused. This is the end of the story chronologically, so the novel is about what leads up to this ...

Hi Elinor, I thought this was great, very real. I'm thinking this is a true story, so I don't really think you need to change anything. This is exactly what ...

Very nice! You didn't say too much or too little to make your readers understand exactly what you are talking about, on the surface anyway. I couldn't tell, was this ...

Wow. This poem is very deep and sad, and it is written very well. I didn't know what you meant by the first couplet. Did you mean that you were ...