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Hey Casey, I'm here as requested! This piece was truly amazing, no joke. I wasn't really affected by this story at all until I reached the end, but then I ...

Hey emoticon! Thanks to be the first to post on my thread! The first thing that stuck out when I read this was that you should separate this into stanzas, ...

Oh, sorry. I didn't read that you don't review lyrics, hahah. Nevermind.

Hi, could you take a look at these lyrics? topic76255.html thanks in advance! -Alex

I liked the idea of this poem, but I think it was just a bit too long and choppy. Sometimes I write poetry in the "list" format, but if you ...

The beat of the song, how I wanted it to be sung, and which syllables you put emphasis on might be confusing, so just post here if you want me ...

Hey Josh, welcome to YWS! Your novel seems like something I would read, because I enjoy writing crime fiction myself. Your adding science and fantasy into the mix sounds like ...

wow. This poem really is incredible. One thing that I loved about it was that you didn't have to make too many metaphors or be symbolic about anything to write ...

hi Y"esterdays! Welcome to YWS. I've only been a member for about a week myself, but it only took me about a day to become hooked! The longer you are ...

Wow. I'm sorry that I don't have anything productive to say about this poem. It was just excellent! I'm usually not picky or anything when I read poetry, because it ...

This is interesting. Maybe because I didn't read it enough times or I didn't read this well enough, but I just don't understand what you're getting at. -Is your character ...

Oh, one last thing I forgot to write in my post. I really discourage changing first-person narrations from scene to scene; it really confuses the reader. -Alex

Overall, I thought this was interesting. Personally, I found your Holocaust story to be much more gripping, but nevertheless, here's what I thought about this story: Prologue: "First, what makes ...

Wow. Not much I can say except that this is amazing. You're a really clever writer, this poem had a great flow to it, your wording was perfect, and it ...

Alright, I would have to start this review by telling you that I know absolutely nothing concerning photography, hahah. However, these pictures are really good. The one with the Maine ...