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Hi Gladiator, I'm here as requested, and I'm sorry to say that I didn't make it too far into the story before I stopped reading. There's nothing really wrong with ...

Hey Gladius! I have to warn you that I have no experience with art and drawing, and because of that I don't know much about it, but I think this ...

Hey! Could you review the first chapter of my novel? Here's the novel's page: Thanks in advance! -Alex

Well, there's not much I have to critique you on with this poem, because it's very origional and there's nothing I would change. I like it. This sort of thing ...

Hey ehte, I really love this. First of all, your last stanza is perfect; don't change a thing. Second, I don't really understand this pair of lines: She is stuck ...

Hey Persephonia, Could you check out these lyrics? Thanks! -Alex

Solvalery and rubberduck, yours are done!

Hey rubberduck, I really like this. Your wording was clever, and your figurative language was fantastic. If I say I love you with all my heart, won't my love size ...

Hey Solvalery, Thank you for asking me to review this excellent poem! I think that your poem has a good length and the wording is unique. And I write this ...

Hey Lumi, I'm sorry that I really do not have much constructive criticizm for you. This is partly due to the fact that much of what I would have said ...

As was said in the two reviews before me, it takes a really talented writer to be able to produce something so raw, moving, and blatent in such a short ...

Hi Flyaway, welcome to YWS! How do you make a word tell a story Of a unexplained murder Or a thrilling adventure ? How do you make a syllable Shout ...

Wow. This poem is really unique. I'm sorry I don't have much constructive criticism for you. When this poem starts off, the reader feels like you are describing someone you ...

Megs, yours is done!