30MarsBars

Mainly third, but every now and then I'll do one in first. I've only ever written one in second person and I didn't know this Buchanan thing existed until two ...

Okay, you've expanded, so now I will :P First, a few structural errors. The parts you've called "bridge" are actually the "pre-chorus" and the part labelled "Repeat 2 times" is ...

There are a lot of errors in your grammar but I won't pick them out because, after all, songs are meant to be heard, not read :P It's a good ...

Giggle Go If Green Guitars Let Everyone AUDACITY

1. Ice Cream 2. Pizza 3. Biscuits and gravy 4: Strawberries! 5. Chocolate 6. Thanksgiving Turkey 7. Strawberry cheese cake 8. Kraft mac and cheese with apple juice and brown ...

Xscape

Ooh, I likey! There's something quite dark about it; mysterious. It's got a good meter for the most part and I really loved the line "Burying the end once again". ...

I like this lyric, it's deep and has a good meter. One thing I picked up on, though, was the way you say 'Death do/did us apart' - whereas the ...

Insects... :x Wasps and bees and creatures with unnatural numbers of legs :(

Teehee, I have that issue of Kerrang! :P And thanks for all the welcomes (and the gift, niteowl)!

Beach

This lyric has a really good emotional impact, especially in the chorus. Your hook is well placed, too. I didn't quite get a strong sense of rhythm, but I think ...

I don't like I LOVE!!!!!! lol heres a new link I had to move it. Do you like 30 seconds to mars I adore them lol Thanks :) I love ...

Apparently it doesn't exist... :? And I see you like Jared Leto...you have good taste! 8)

Why don't you just get an extra computer?