3-Damentional

This is good 'cause I normally don't get other people's poetry. It wold've been a whole lot less understandable w/o the background but I get it. Good stuff.

In the last episode... We introduced the origin of Damen Tolbert as the superhero, 3-Damentional from Chicago. He has the power to alter reality. And he's harder; better, faster, stronger, ...

It was a good piece of work, I'll give you that much. I think that you could've been more creative with it though. The constant references to the sun showed ...

WAIT! Before you go on reading I must tell you that the multiple spelling errors/ punctuation errors are completely deliberate. It is used to show the intelligence of the speaker. ...

It was kind of difficult to understand the first time but after I reread it, I understood colpletely. You did this one right because I felt the speaker's pain through ...

What’s good? My name is Grendel Malman, and I go to, or used to go to, Herot High School. Recently I got expelled for some stupid stuff. You want to ...

(Spelling and punctuation errors deliberate to show the intelligence level of the speaker.) Yo, wassup wit cha? I know watcha heard. I’m here to tell you the truth about what ...

I understand where you are coming from but it was written like spoken word. The "Do" you reffered to was deliberate but the missing "s" on word was not. If ...

Warning: May not be as interesting as latter episodes but don't give up hope His name is Damen Terrance Tolbert. He is well mannered, very sexy, very intillgent, and extremely ...

Inspired by my brother, Daniel Tolbert You know him But not who he is You know where he's been But not where he is You've seen what he does But ...

I see from the inside out Though no one else believes me I just can't help but wonder Do my eyes deceive me? They see an object of desire A ...

I liked it. People need to realize that poems aren't perfect by the time you realize that there's nothing more you can do with it. I actually read he whole ...