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Re: Dandelion Season
This is awesome. When I saw the length of the piece I thought I wasn't going to read the whole thing but it trapped me. I could'nt look away. I ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Friends
Overall... I liked this piece of work. One of the things that I love about it is that it makes you put some of the pieces together yourself while remaining ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Because I'm Gangsta!
Wow... all of these compliments and insults for the same piece of work. Interesting...
May 16, 2008 -
Re: Because I'm Gangsta!
*note* I wrote this in response to the sudden rise in "gangstas" at my high school. Enjoy! Because I'm Gangsta!!! Do you know who I am? I’m a gangsta! People ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Anti-Poetry
*note* this is a satirical poem. it was written to ironic and funny so don't get too analytical when making your comments. ANTI-POETRY You know what I can't stand to ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but then all the animals would stop killing each other as food. Us included. That means no more ribs! No one wants that. So I'd rather the lose a ...
Sep 6, 2007 -
Re: Silence, please: A cry for action
Every day we all complain. We may not realize it but it's true. We are constantly, and unnecessarily, letting others know of your status. We are always telling someone about ...
Sep 6, 2007 -
Re: Useless and Meaningless
This poem sucks. It was made up in class with absolutely no effort. If you read the first letter of each line, you'll be able to find out how I ...
Mar 13, 2007 -
Re: Change One Letter
Less
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: Me or Him?
This piece was created after reading Johnathan Swift's "A Modest Proposal" in class. The teacher told us to write a satirical essay of our own. I was going to make ...
Feb 11, 2007 -
Re: Pick The Background!
I think we should go with a green and black tribal-like background with a green and blue theme.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Faith Amrita
Excellent imagery. I can't figure out if they were in love because you only said that they were friends. I wish that you would have gone more in-dept with how ...
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: My Shoes
This piece is dedicated to all of those who think that they're life is hard. It is meant to be read exactly how it's written. The punctuation marks are put ...
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Left/Grasshopper Drive
I, too, enjoy the imagery. I saw it in my mind wonderfully. I'm not sure if it's just me or not but I failed to see any pattern whatsoever. It's ...
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Students
I think the rhythym was perfect. It made me think about the old lady in the shoe. If the Man was replaced by a child or something, I would have ...
Feb 4, 2007
