3-Damentional

At first glance, I had the reaction that you were probably looking for; "WTF is he talking about?" Like the previous commentator, the last line is what cleared the whole ...

I really enjoyed this poem. The first line really inspired me to read further as to why the wind must be fast. I view it as kind of humorous how ...

Before I get into the song, I would like to put out a disclaimer: I did not write this song... the lady in my dream did. One night I was ...

My urge to write stems from the emotional fight within. Will I win? Or maybe I just might lose as dudes do when they try to create rules set by ...

Applause, applause, applause and more applause. This was nearly perfect. From the very first until the very last, I was compelled to read. I love how you never actually gave ...

I like how you use the term "real talk" and based a piece around it. I have to say that I like the concept but the delivery was really off. ...

I have to say that it's nice to see a poem that is positive instead of gloomy like most of the stuff on this site. The "But not here" repetition ...

This poem is very creative in its word usage with your multiple references to how the wind moves and whatnot. You had a good opening but in the third and ...

The only advise I can give you is to cut down on the unnecessary details and do more to advance the plot. I like the ambiance and mood of the ...

You obviously didn't read the introductory note. Either that or you didn't understand it. This is a piece of satire. Of course Rap is not the cause of these things. ...

*note* The one thing in writing and in my speech that I pride myself on is my way to make anything seem logical no matter how unbelievable. For speech class, ...

I have to say that it is a bit confusing. Where did the girl come from and what was he supposed to be doing in the shadows? Other than those ...

*note* One day I asked myself, "Do crazy people know that they're crazy?" and went from there. *note* Ayo, G... Let me tell you the story about the time I ...

Honestly, I'm not going apologize for the poem. I believe that we are all entitled to our own form of self expression. If you didn't like it that much, you ...

Look at him! Always lookin' for chicks with ass, flash some cash so he can smash and then dash like Sonic. A cute face really ain't needed. Just a little ...