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I think that this poem had little--or no--meter. It felt choppy and random on my tongue as I read it. And it felt as though there was little feeling. It ...

I really liked this. It was confusing in places, and it could use work. But I think that you left the reader free to imagine what the story behind this ...

I liked this. It was simple and exciting- but don't take a liking to simple writing. I would have loved to've read more detail and explanation, about why he was ...