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mindlessness

Some floaty, cloudy, harmonious place commonly known as heaven. ~Sunny

When life gives you lemons, the appropriate response is: " What the heck?! " :lol: ~Sunny

Incendio! *swish, sets tree on fire* Expelliarmus! *swoosh, knocks brother off feet* Wingardium Leviosa! *sends dog flying in the air* Ha ha! I'd pretend it was a wand, and I'm ...

Well, let's just say that he (the certain boyfriend) would no longer be able to father children. :twisted: What would you do if your boss cut your salary, assigned you ...

It sounds like it could be a fictional book about a teen's bumpy life like Looking for Alibrandi or something, or it could also be a scary airplane thriller, but ...

Banned for accusing foxfire of misspelling "avatar" even though it's true. ~Sunny

Basically, I agree with every word Sela said. Your writing is great, you have good description and pacing, and it flows very well. But your characters are . . . ...

Banned for having a weirder avatar. :wink: ~Sunny

10/10. Lion King rules! :D ~Sunny

Ah, it looks like heaven! ~Sunny

I've read and written many stories that have had multiple POVs, and I think it makes the plot more interesting, especially if the characters are well defined. It gives each ...

Hey, Lone Wolf! :smt039 I'm Sunny, and welcome to YWS! Be careful, this place can be addictive. :wink: Well, there are some rules at YWS that are pretty much the ...

4/10. :) Cool pic. ~Sunny

8/10. Very poetic. :) ~Sunny