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:lol: Cute! 9/10. ~Sunny

7/10. I don't have the energy at the moment to read the French part, but the other one is good. I always like the friend/best friend comparisons. ~Sunny

Banned for being a member of the Grammar Police! :evil: :D ~Sunny

I think it helps if there's sadness going on. Death, or the ominousness of death, or doubt, or something unique to the character. I usually like to make it something ...

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I would think: "Ah-ha! I have the cooler avi!" :lol: What would you do if you were forbidden, under pain of death, to write? ~Sunny

6/10. I think it would be better if you took out the "Anna always wondered" part, and started out with the end of the world belief, and then when you're ...

"Someone slightly mysterious. Someone who is different. Like me." ~ Anna "Anyone. Just . . . anyone." ~ Juliette What would you do if the person you loved was in ...

Hey, defendthelegend! I'm back to review the first chapter. :) “Back from school already?” my mum [s]questioned[/s] questions me with suspicion. “I am always home this early,” I shout[s]ed[/s]

Hey, Moonstar! I'm Sunny, and I shall be your reviewer today. :) I took a deep breath. The air was humid so that breath ing didn't really help, it just ...

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Q . . . "Queen and I" by Gym Class Heroes

completely confuses everyone to the point where they make up more diabolical plans that are . . .

"20th century Russian classical." ~ Anna "French pop." ~ Juliette "Alternative metal." ~ Alex "Anything, really. I've . . . never thought about it, actually." ~ Jack What would you ...

Freak. Out. Totally. What if you lost your fingers to frostbite? ~Sunny