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Banned for being so dang technical. ~Sunny

Title: Vindicated Genre: Other Fiction/Horror Link: Rating: PG-13 I don't usually write horror, but this is for a vampire contest, and it needs help. The deadline's August 20, so take ...

Hi, Lils! I really need some help with this one: It's a contest entry, about vampires again. :lol: Only I really need some help. Really. The deadline's August 20, so ...

Hey, Tiger! Can you review this for me? It's for a contest, but the deadline's in August, so take your time. :) Thanks a bunch! :D ~Sunny

9/10. I think it would be more intriguing if you added something that was like "until I . . ." whatever. Because just leaving it like that seems a little ...

No. At least, I'd like to think I wouldn't. I'm a firm believer in not doing things for money, and I think I'd be okay with not pushing the button, ...

neurotic

Banned for using an incomplete sentence. :P ~Sunny

6/10. :) ~Sunny

8.5/10. Anime bicep curls. :P ~Sunny

Mostly I write in order. Usually, it hasn't worked much in the past, but lately it's been doing wonders. I'm surprised how well things have been able to flow, going ...

Hey, Moonstar. I'm here as requested. Unfortunately, I have to say that I can only spot a few changes, like the extended acting scene. I'm still seeing a lack of ...

Hey, Shina! Can you review this for me? Vindicated It's Other Fiction, rated PG-13. :D ~Sunny

EW! NO! Man. That is a gross thought. TPBM cannot stand tummy hair. ~Sunny

8.5/10. Stella will resent that. :lol: ~Sunny