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Re: The Followers (Updated) Part One
This is a really creative story, but I would have enjoyed reading it more if it wasn't quite so long, and if there was more punctuation. If you want to ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Magic of the Four Elements~Chapter 9
This is a really good story. I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing I would recommend fixing right now is that at the beginning, it moves kinda fast. You ...
Jan 8, 2009