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  • 1TryingBird
    Feb 9, 2024

    "A hero is only as strong as his villain."

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  • R33SES
    Feb 9, 2024

    Hey! Just wanted to let you know about this FREE Custom Graphics database I've started where I'm putting entire themes worth of graphics for people to use in their reviews. Similar to the custom theme I have for mine that you liked. So far I have a Gold and Bold, and a Royal Elegance theme, but I'll be adding a ton more! Hope you enjoy.


    1TryingBird Gold and Bold? You read my mind, that is literally my favorite theme. GOLD
    Feb 9, 2024


    R33SES Haha well hey, there you go, made just for you.
    Feb 9, 2024


  • aaliyahlaurier
    Feb 9, 2024

    hii i saw your reviews and i was wondering if you could review what i've uploaded of my novel "Candy" <333


    1TryingBird Candy, a girls novel?
    I am a boy... but if you want I will try my hardest to give a full honest review

    Feb 9, 2024


    aaliyahlaurier thank you aha <3
    Feb 9, 2024

  • Good morning, Young Writers family, an idea for a book popped into my head before bed last night. Something I was going to write, but decided to wait until the morning.

    So today I begin on my first book (ever) and pray I can do this (im not that good at book writing 😭). I already have a few cover designs, and the overall plot of the story, just have to work on the character and a backstory and timeline.
    But look at this amazing image: (and its not even the only one)


    Image


    Kaia Ooh I like it!!
    Feb 9, 2024


  • avianwings47
    Feb 9, 2024

    Hey, congrats on your first shiny review star! It looks great! :D


    1TryingBird Hey, thanks, gonna build me a collection :cool:
    Feb 9, 2024

  • It's time for you to look inward and start asking yourself the big question: Who are you, and what do you want?
    - Uncle Iroh


  • Leaves from the vine
    Falling so slow
    Like fragile, tiny shells
    Drifting in the foam
    Little soldier boy
    Come marching home
    Brave soldier boy
    Comes marching home. – Uncle Iroh

  • Ooh welcome to YWS! Love the profile pic!!


    1TryingBird Thank you, I was planning on using it as my signature, but decided against it.
    Feb 8, 2024


    Kaia It's still super cute :D
    Feb 8, 2024


  • Youbeaucupid
    Feb 8, 2024

    Congrats on your first star!! ⭐


    1TryingBird Thanks, and here's to many more! πŸ₯‚
    Feb 8, 2024

  • GOOD NOW EVERYONE! I hope you all are having a swell day so far.


  • Youbeaucupid
    Feb 7, 2024

    Thank you for the gift! <3 😭😭


    1TryingBird you are very welcome
    Feb 8, 2024


  • avianwings47
    Feb 7, 2024

    Sooo… do you also happen to be a lover of birds? (Also, welcome :D )


    1TryingBird Yes I love birds, they are actually my favorite animal, but don't quiz me on all the different types, I'm not good with those lol.

    And thanks for welcoming me! :cool:

    Feb 7, 2024


  • APoltergeist
    Feb 7, 2024

    Welcome to YWS Bird (is that alright for me to call you?)! I hope you enjoy your stay here ^^


    1TryingBird Sure, Bird is just fine.

    Thanks for welcoming me Polt :smile:

    Feb 7, 2024


    APoltergeist Of course! ^^
    Feb 7, 2024

  • Hello there! Welcome to YWS :D Hope you'll enjoy it here!!


    1TryingBird Thanks
    Feb 7, 2024

  • Everybody!
    this is my new review template (not for reviewing poems and really short stuff) and also a contest submission!
    FEEL FREE TO USE IT, BUT DONT MODIFY IT PLEASE, just tell me if there was a problem.


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    [color=red][b]RED[/b]: [sub][i][u] | Energy | Note their errors, but be sure to tell them how to improve on them.[/i][/u][/sub]
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    [*] <-- Errors -->
    [*] <-- Ways to improve said errors -->
    [*] <-- Ways to avoid making those errors -->
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    [color=orange][b]ORANGE[/b]: [sub][i][u] | Success | Explain what you think about the story, and where you expect it to go[/i][/u][/sub]
    [list=i]
    [*] <-- What are your initial thoughts on the story as a whole -->
    [*] <-- Where do you think the story could go in terms of success-->
    [*] <-- What are your expectations for future additions to the story (if none, put future expectations for the writer)-->
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    [color=yellow][b]YELLOW[/b]: [sub][i][u] | Happiness | Tell them what they did good, and what you like specifically about the story[/i][/u][/sub]
    [list=i]
    [*] <-- What did they do good? -->
    [*] <-- What do you like about the story (be specific) -->
    [*] <-- Examples -->
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    [color=green][b]GREEN[/b]: [sub][i][u] | Quality | Inform them of the pacing of the story[/i][/u][/sub]
    [list=i]
    [*] <-- Was the pacing too slow or too fast? Or was it just right? -->
    [*] <-- Problems with the pacing, and how to fix them -->
    [*] <-- Examples -->
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    [color=blue][b]BLUE[/b]: [sub][i][u] | Loyalty | Were the character developments notable? [/i][/u][/sub]
    [list=i]
    [*] <-- What are your thoughts on the characters development, how could it be improved? --.
    [*] <-- What about ~this character~ made you like/hate them/the way they were written -->
    [*] <-- Examples -->
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    [color=purple][b]PURPLE[/b]: [sub][i][u] | Luxury | Final thoughts, what did you take from the story? [/i][/u][/sub]
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    [*] <-- What did you take from this story -->
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    [*] <--Examples-->
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    [face=Times New Roman][color=brown] Recommendations and Referrals (links) [/color][/face]

    [sup]Sign Off[/sup]  <-- You can use your profile picture or your signature, for this I am going to use both -->

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— Ari11