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Ahem... I'm athiest...

What happened to the way things were, How the sunsets all seemed beautiful, Yet now they pass without my knowledge, Now that I have to be so dutiful. - What ...

Classy what I meant with that line I'd that I'll keep trying for something new. I doubt Socrates or Edison or any other of those figures could still think anyway, ...

Great minds think alike they say, How all our thoughts are all the same, I work to figure out the code, Only to see they’ve found my gold. - It’s ...

Acid rain runs down my face, Self-indulgence to blame, I was so sure I was invincible, But I hang my head in shame. - Tears streak down like night-time comets, ...

I said "The sun rises down" to kinda emphasize the point that they're not what they seem to be

Such a beautiful girl, She resides in all of my dreams, But her lips taste much nicer, In our fused realities. Love binds us together, With its tender secret magic, ...

Please darling let me cry your tears, So you don't have to live like this, You've cried enough today my dear, You know you have my forgiveness. - Please darling ...

Looking good, I like how you described love in such detail, and comparing it to a dance. The streamers were a nice touch too. Gold star

"Wow, this story has taken a big turn, what the hell happened?" Rayman. "Why do people keep showing up? There has to be a source of all this madness!" Mario ...

All of the sudden Toad came through the space rift. "Mario I have a letter from Peach adressed to you! Bowser took her to a strange lava planet on his ...

All of the sudden, Chuck Norris rose up. "You forgot one fatal thing, my friend... I'm Chuck Norris, and I can never die." He delivered a roundhouse kick to each ...

I can take a critique, but I was just aiming to see how the audience interpreted it. A mirror is symbolism for imagination and also truth, so a house of ...

We walk on our eternal home. We feel as though we will one day live beneath it. You will. It’s easy to live underneath. Yet it’s difficult for those who ...

All of the sudden Chuck Norris came in and gave everybody a thumbs up.