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The problem with arguing the concept of athiesm. Part 1. Introduction As an athiest, I have often found myself in the opposition of a debate involving religion.  Athiests can never ...

Actually... I am an athiest. Lol

When It's hard trying to press on, And impossible to go back ; Give all you have to holding true, And do not let yourself slack. This didn't quite seem ...

I agree with ben, but I also think some of your lines were too short, just try to keep the length consistent

I think litehawk covered most of it, but I think you should even out the stanzas a bit

I used to be a nonbeliever, I doubted every notion. We can’t just slap hearts on a wall, Or create it with a potion. - Love’s not an easy game ...

I'm sorry, I'm in a bit of a stress, it was uncalled for

Funny, I was just learning the other day that as an audience member, you must put yourself in the speaker's shoes... So maybe you should try putting yourself in the ...

Death of an Athiest: I lay here on what’s soon to be my death bed, Black roses to be at my feet, And I won’t accomplish anything, Just fade into ...

Uhh, wow... This is kinda messy... Love is a very cliche topic, first of all... Not many people enjoy love poems as much anymore... Second of all, the flow and ...

Lately I've noticed a lot of my works haven't recieved much feedback, and few views.. I know I'm not a well known writer around here but I'd really like constructive ...

Banned for liking jesus

It's hard to believe I didn't see, How evil the world could really be. It's hard to believe I didn't smell, The stench of smoke in this wretched hell. It's ...

"Freaks" is what they're labled, Monsters their maiden name, Outcasts are what they really are, Now they have a greusome fame. - They perform to entertain us, Although at them ...

That's kinda ironic for you because I was jewish before I was athiest LOL. It's not a story I'm telling, if it was it would be in the narrative poetry ...