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this is really good and it made me think, i got lost in the words and was sad when it was over keep writing you have natural talent Not to ...

(Dedicated to the yes song, which inspired me on some parts) When do we reach the end? When is a thought complete? And how many have we left? Distractions took ...

What fools we all are When compromise comes, We cling to the wrong Don't stick to our guns. - And whether we win, The loser will cry, Yet in the ...

Up go my barriers again There's nothing left I can defend, Given you my heart I would Now I only wish I could. - Words can heal and words can ...

Today's the day I start my life All over again once more. Today I find a better cause That's more worth fighting for. - Today's the day I give up ...

I submitted it from my itouch (where I write all my stuff) so I guess it got messed up, it wasn't a huge chunk of text in the notepad

He stumbled into his home, his head was now buzzing with thoughts.  Guilt, shame, stupidity, they all bore their marks on him.  He yanked open a cupboard door and pulled ...

She sat there with legs dangling over the edge, looking down at the people 40 stories down, who seemed to flock together and flow like rivers down the sidewalk as ...

First off, the explanation at the beginning was completely unnecessary. It took away from the poetry. You shouldn't have to explain yourself for expressing yourself, it seems more like you're ...

God's been on break apparently since he was first recognized. Rather shady I think.

I whole-heartedly agree with galerius. Love poems are so cliche, everyone wants to say something, but unless you can do it in a way that other people want to read, ...

Our field: Past the tall grass and through the field, two lovers lie and never yield. In the sun's warmth The lovers kiss, With true passion And magic bliss. - ...

ahem.. Kate, I liked the criticism but you're telling me to basically write a completely different poem..

*This is my first topic in Non-fiction. Just say that i got inspired to write this from various influences Part I: the Clockmaker “I cannot imagine how the clockwork of ...

Holy crap I'm athiest with Jewish principles too! I think it was nice, but there was one rhyme that was forced, it was the one ending in gloat. I liked ...