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I like it!!! :D Good job! :D it really flows and sounds good! It has a good idea to it and is put together nicely! Thanks for sharing! God bless. ...

I like your song its great!! :D You could use i little rhyming here and there :roll: but other then that you did good! I am wondering the tune though... ...

Thanks, But No Thanks Sanding in the rain Thinking something’s going change I don’t where I don’t how I don’t why I fly’s right bye CHORUS Running in the rain ...

I love it! :D it sounds loving and caring which is great! when i read it i pictured a homeless person or even abortion. :cry: I really liked it and ...

It is good but.... it seems dark. :( It really didn't give me a good feeling after i read it. If you are going to write about pain then show ...

I like it! :D it was short and sweet! It flowed and sounded good! It was deep and made me think. How does it relate to love by your point ...

I like your song!! :D i like the theme with the Prince and stuff! 8) your rhyming was great as well!! Keep Writing And thanks for sharing!! God bless "They ...

The last dance 60 years ago Was the first time They saw each other Fell in love with one another He asked her to dance CHORUS They danced together Such ...

Hey! Your song is short but you seem like you have a pretty good idea of writing songs! But you need a hook and for it to flow. Ryhyming would ...

I like it! it has a nice beat and i like the "People!" part, it is catchy! keep writing! "They can, because they think they can"

that is a great song!! good job! keep writing songs and music! God bless and thanks for sharing!

Simply Beautiful Take a breath Forget it all Remember when It was all So beautiful Chorus Breathe it in One last time Make the effort To try to find You ...

A Desire to Live It was a Monday in San Francisco with cars racing, people going to work, and the waves on the beach coming in and out. In the ...