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By the way, before you read it, I just want to let you know that this is the most violent scene so far, so if you don't like reading about ...

I only had time to read a little of it, and I think you should break it up into a few posts. It took me a while just to scroll ...

I agree. Perhaps a little more info, or a little more detailed. But I liked the amount of dramatic description crammed into that little space, it does make it (the ...

Name: Anthony Baker Age: 13 Occupation before invasion: None, lived in his rich father's mansion. Skills/talents: Small and stealthy, a good scout. Physically: Short, shaved head, Brown eyes, wears bl

Two years, four months, eight days, fifteen hours, eleven minutes and nine seconds before that moment was the time that I first experienced the horror that is death. Normally, my ...

I liked this piece, it gives the reader a feeling of watching the world from outside of reality. I liked the bit with the seasons going by. Can I just ...

"Make you feel better" in your pants... *shudders*

We kept on walking slowly for a few minutes, and the zombie was walking in an odd way. I guessed that was what happened after being stuck in the same ...

I liked how you managed to explain so much in just those few paragraphs. I liked the whole thing with his parents and the flashback, and the frustration. But maybe ...

I love how it flows along. I hope you're not really giving up, your words need you! I like the rhyming scheme of abca, because it means that you don't ...

I'm not that bothered about grammar and stuff, but I loved the tension and the horror bits. I would say that I couldn't put it down, but I'll have to ...

The three of us had woken up hours later. It was seven O’clock by the time we could stand up. It must have been really strong and Ricky reckoned that ...

He was a scrawny, emaciated looking boy of ten or eleven with untidy blond hair. Why would you say ten or eleven years old? Is it because he doesn't know ...

I was a jet, smashing the sound barriers with my arms outstretched and a delighted cry on my tongue. I would be thirteen at 2:43 in the afternoon on that ...

"Oooooh! I can write what I just said, which was really interesting. Oh dear, I should have kept my mouth shut..."