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Thanks :D. I thought of it in an English lesson when we were doing poetry, and it's based loosely on experience (Not that I'm an adult, but I've seen/heard about ...

I've never really attempted poetry but I tried my best. My exams just finished so I have the time now to experiment. Please give constructive feedback and also, let me ...

Hi, my name's Matt, and I'm going to critique your work tonight. Enjoy :D Anyway, Nitpicks first. I can’t breathe without you. I can’t sleep without you. I just thought ...

Definately, it's my freind's birthday and my sister's eighteenth birthday party tomorrow, so I'm bouncing off walls (figuratively. ((Sorry for the cliche')):D)

Maybe that should be rated :D. I liked it. I would suggest a bit of punctuation, which is not needed, but it makes it easier to read aloud. Something I ...

I have it, but... I have 1 pic that I hate and all I ever do is quixxes and stuff, I don't want to go on it any more than ...

Suffering I read something by somebody (I think it was Nate) on this site that said that we'd rather read something called: "My tragic Tale of misery." Than something like: ...

Some nitpicks first: Black sailed tears I don't know if this is a phrase, but it really didn't make sense to me. Love unlocks my horizon with a moonlit cloud; ...

:( I feel awful now... That was incredible, but so, painfully sad. The last line was perfect, and really sums it up nicely, and the repitition from the bit at ...

Just a few nit picks: He heard only, his brother’s ragged breathing next to him. Remove the comma please. One morning after a terrible battle Both sides had had enough ...

One little thing I noticed, that I just wanted to get out of the way now, but I wasn't sure what this meant: this is an all go mission vital ...

I really liked the kind of feel you get from it, and it has little detail as to why, but it is so good that you don't want to know. ...

I have no points that June didn't point out, so I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it. It's the kind of poem that makes your day when ...

I agree on the point raised about the first two lines, but I didn't feel like the first one did too much damage too the flow, so I suggest you ...

I did, but I was eight, so I think that's excusable. It's slightly easier knowing how the charecter will react, but you just hate their... familiarity. Where's the fun in ...