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Re: Assassin's Chronicles: Roses of May ch 1
Ok then, so I wanna start by pointing out a couple of small errors I noticed as I read, most of which can be cured with a simple spoken proof ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: :: Rain ::
I'd like to start by saying that I admire the fact that you are brave enough to write a sonnet, they terrify me :D. Anyway, I loved the way that ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Momentary Distraction
An interesting take on a car crash :D Nice repitition, I like the theme, the feeling when you're suddenly thrown into a situation so fast and terrifying that you lose ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
Well really teenage years are generally spent trying to find an personal identity, so the exoerience may add to that. As overeasy rightly said, they are not pointless and build ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: 10 and 11 year old Thugs brutally torture two boys.
I can't imagine what kind of parenting leads to such a disaster? I haven't seen any motives like religion of provocation in the news yet, so they must have simply ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Skinning of LIVE Animals
Oh my god I just couldn't watch that video... That was horrible... Signed it, though... How does somebody do that to an animal?
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Your Writing Insecurities
Mine's detail in the overall storyline, I am always terrified of putting in too much, or too little. I'm alright with description, but especially when it somes to certain scenarios ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: How do you imagine you writing?
I'm doing the same coursework now. I was supposed to be reading it but got bored and watched it on xepisodes, it's so funny. I loved the genesis machine idea, ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: Cats vs. Dogs
I've got two cats (1 thick, 1 smart) and two dogs (1 big, 1 small), so I guess I'm a good one to ask, even if I say so myself. ...
Sep 8, 2009 -
Re: YWS Radio Show #14: Sunday, August 2
Awesome, on my Birthday :D Are birthday shout outs allowed?
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Possible Beginning of Porter Chronicles
I think that grammar is an issue and I agree that it needs to be re-written. For example: .........I'm no longer Calvin Gray and I'm no longer a kid I'm ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: A Tribute to Michael Jackson
So true, he was a legend. That thing about all those bands, I totally agree, I don't listen to much music, mostly because most bands don't have any depth, they ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Unknown
Hey, I'm gonna give this one a proper reveiw if I can, so I'll start off by writing any errors I come across as I go. First up: Four moons ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Unknown
It was really good, once again. Again, we had the mytery, such as the switch from 1st to third person repeating, because it raises the question as to whether or ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Unknown
If there's one thing you need to change, it's that comment at the end, that was electrifying! It's really gripped me from the beginning. It was a little hard to ...
May 26, 2009
