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Deffinitely worth continuing! I love how Peter created his own pet, I think that was a clever idea. You captured the perfect attitude for the mom as well. It set ...

This poem is so true! I mean, how many times are people really sorry for what they've done? "Sorry" means you won't do it again. Sorry has just become a ...

Thanks for all the corrections. A lot of them I didn't catch in my own review. I don't really plan on telling more about Taint's history, at least not until ...

Rain pelted down from an ink-black sky in sheets, slicing through the leaves. The forest was filled with the sound of dripping water. Thunder rumbled over head while lighting stabbed ...

I'm not oneto drag things out, so I'm going to get right to the point. Your story was epic, and if you didn't win the contest already, you have a ...

That was probaly one of the saddest stories I've ever read. I love how you used a lot of similies to describe what was happening. I'm assuming that the girl ...

You're story was very good. I found one mistake: "I screamed. Lunging at the sheath strapped to Zeldrene's hip, I slipped his knife out and tossed it like a javelin. ...

I don't think it was bad at all. It's very good considering it was your first poem. The lines flow well and you were able to keep up the rhyme ...

This poem is morbid, but amazing at the same time. The description in your lines really captured my attention and the story really makes you think.

This poem was so creepy, but in a good way. I love the dark message and how, at least this is how I preceived it, there is an underlying story ...

Just for clarification purposes, the capitalization at the beginning of every line I did on purpose. I do that for all of my poems as sort of like my trade ...

This was an amazing poem. You have a great vocabulary and your similies and metaphors are phenominal.

Sometimes things happen without warning. You wake up one morning, And you feel fine. Not a single sign That Death is at your door. Not knowing what life has in ...