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Not bad. Not bad at all. I couldn't find any grammar errors (I'm a grammar Nazi, sorry xD). All in all, it was a beautiful song that got the point ...

I have to agree with Maimoona. The first line makes no sense. These two lines don't make much sense either: Words take me bleeding out the wound Words take me ...

Well that was depressing, but I loved it nonetheless. There was a huge twist in the beginning. At first, I thought this was going to be a love poem, then ...

Whoa. That's all I can say. This poem was fantastic. My favorite stanza was: Morning drags the round, white sun Up to kiss the frozen earth, To meet the hills ...

Wonderful poem, that's all there is to it. It has a great concept and it flows well. You kept up the pattern for each stanza and you were able to ...

So, I wrote this poem about a girl I knew who was struck and killed by a car while walking home from a friend's house. She was looking down and ...

I'm blown away. That's all I can say. The beginning; hilarious. Absolutely hysterical. The end was so sad... Such a sudden change of events. It completely threw me off guard. ...

I love the detail in this! Are you going to continue the story?! Seriously, you should if you havn't already because I really want to read more. I don't recall ...

Thtat was... Very deoressing to put it lightly, but a very well written story. The only thing that confused me is: Who is Lisa? I don't know if it's just ...

I have nothing to complain about. The description of Megan's suicide was amazing. I could see the bathroom scene so clearly. I'm not usually one for romantic stories, but for ...

That was such a sad story! Oh my gosh, I was about to start crying. That takes real talent to evoke such emotion. And the ending was so bittersweet. I ...

“Good evening, Taint.” Taint opened his eyes to find himself in a moonlit clearing, the leaves turned to silver. Roulette was sitting a few feet away with his tail curled ...

This is an amazing beginning to your story. There are some grammar things I noticed though. For starters, instead of repeating "old king" or "old village" over and over, try ...

I have to agree with Skylar. The story did seem a bit rushed, but the description was pretty good. I think you need to add a little more detail about ...

Beautiful story. Absolutely amazing. The only thing I have to point out is whenever a new person speaks, you need to start a new paragraph. Other than that, I found ...