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Okay, first of all, I want to say that this had to be one of the best poems I've ever read. It was truely phenominal. You have real talent, and ...

That Special Week The horrid smell And cramps that clench the gut. Don't forget the mood swings too! Trapping me in a prison cell. That is what My periods do. ...

First of all, I'd like to just say wow. This was incredible. Absolutely amazing. The imagry just blew me away. Quote: His hair, a dark and devilish plumage, swayed like ...

I love this poem! I definitely think you should post it on a sign or banner and use it as a protest. I don't recall any grammar errors, and it ...

You seem so wrong. You seem so right. I go along. I try to fight. I love you. I hate you. I miss your smile. I will you away. You ...

First of all, I have to say I love the rhyme scheme here. I know from experience that it's a difficult one to follow through a whole poem. Quote: Let ...

This is my first attempt at writing a love poem. Usually, my poems are depressing and about death. Lemme know what ya think! I just want to know That you'll ...

Il ike the concept you have here, but I think it needs a little work. Before I go all Grammar Nazi and stuff and ramble on until you want to ...

So, I wrote this poem several years ago for a school project when we were reading Out of the Dust . I hope you like it. I stand here now ...

I have to agree with Jaetwee. The rhyming was very off. Like, you were constantly rhyming one sound, and only a few stanzas had rhyme scheme going, which makes the ...

I loved this poem! It was short, sweet and simple, as well as to the point. I've never really liked the long, elaborate poems. The only thing I would change ...

Hey there! Great poem, just so you know. I couldn't find any corrections to make (I'm guessing Noelle found them all lol!) I can't put my finger on what I ...

Okay, so a lot of people were saying there were too many commas, periods, ect. So I went ahead and erased all of them to see if that would help. ...

Um, can anybody say "EPIC!" This poem was hysterical in a creepy kind of way. I know I chuckled more than once. Haha, "Please don't mind the Hitler 'stache" That ...

This poem is just a follow up on Teardrops From Heaven . I wrote it after being at the viewing for the girl. It starts out as my feelings and ...