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well thank you very much. :) It's just my style. and i don't really think you have the license to tell me what's wrong or right. I'm not exactly looking ...

hey that's no problem. It's a lot more complicated than i make it seem, I was getting really mad and i wrote that to him....but i couldn't send it so ...

Hey! I'm Isabelle, Isi for shortness thank you very much! I love this poem, I can totally relate! Just one thing that kinda bugged me a lil bit... It is ...

ok people. i don't know why i posted this. but hey! i did. and i KNOW i made a large amount of SPELLING and GRAMMATICAL errors, but i don't really ...

Wow. I loooove this. Super awesomeness!

Wow! This is extremely educational. I didn't even know that guys had trouble talking to girls! I thought it was the opposite. I suppose it goes both ways :) All ...

I remember that day, the breeze picked up, blowing my hair across my face, a hide away, you saved me. Brought me to the place, so publicly hidden, people passed ...

DUH! :P

Thank you so much. I will maybe try and improve it. His mom wants me to read it at his funeral. But everytime I think of it, I burst into ...

OMGILOVEITSOMUCHICANTBELIEVEHOWAWESOMEITIS! Ok sorry. I hope you can decipher it. I LOVE NATHANIEL! He is DEFINETLY my favorite! =) I would say that the plot is underdeveloped, but then I would ...

This is for Ben Hartley, one of my dearest friends, he recently went suicidal. He was only 16. I will miss him forever. And will never forget him. I knew ...

His smile, Still caught in the front of my mind, Can't move on, from what never was, thinking of him, brings back a pain to terrifying to describe, and yet, ...

I IMMENSELY LOVE THIS POEM! Has to be my favorite so far! I love the simple yet complex theme. And the unique way that you said it. It made me ...

I think this is a very good start. And like the person above me said, it needs some work. I would suggest rewriting certain parts and giving us a clearer ...