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Thank you for your review azntwinz2, it definately helps to get that kind of feedback. I'll discuss your comments with my friend. Thanks for being so thorough :) ..:Ced:..

Oh God, I got goosebumps. That was so well written. It was very emotional and thought-provoking to read. Well done. No criticism from me. :)

In response to your feedback 'PhoenixBishop', I believe when Adalia is referred to as "the fairest in the land" it is regarding her appearance, not her nature. That was my ...

Thanks 'outofthebox'. I should have said it was more of a journey through my life so far rather than highschool. I know it's confusing without that bit of information but ...

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwww!!!! This is amazing. You have such a talent. This piece has such a dreary feeling to it but it's extremely well written. And such a unique idea. Well done. ...

Thanks a bunch =D Now that I look back I wonder why I didn't expand on how the character was able to live as long as she did. I knew ...